Today is Mothering Sunday. Hope every Mum receives lots of extra hugs and kisses from her children, hope today is very very special 🙂
Here’s a story I wrote for my kids a couple of weeks ago. I know, I know…still a bit clunky, but as soon as I stop procrastinating I’ll sort it out 🙂
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“Alfie Brown’s Day Off School”
The winter was snowy
And turned the world white.
The village of Giggleswick
Woke from a very cold night.
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The kettles got busy,
The dogs wagged their tails.
The adults kept yawning
And moved slower than snails.
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The parents poached eggs
And the children had toast,
On crisp Monday morning
Decorated by frost.
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The voice on the radio
Advised to keep warm.
It said the school’s closed
Due to the snowstorm.
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Most children went out
To build a snowman,
But young Alfie Brown
Had his own curious plan.
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“That’s cool,” he grinned
And ran to his room.
“I’ll set up my rocket
For launch this afternoon.”
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He put on his spacesuit
And helmet with microphone.
Then spoke to space traffic control
With a professional tone.
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“The Moon expedition
Is ready for …”
Alfie stopped talking
And stared at the floor.
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He rubbed his eyes,
Then dropped his toy,
Because in front of him
Stood the tiniest boy.
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“Who are you?” asked Alfie.
“And how did you get here?
I’m busy commanding.
You must not come near.”
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“My rocket is ready
To fly to the Moon,
So cover your ears
In case it goes BOOM!”
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The little boy shivered
And whispered: “Hello,
I’m Peter the Crumbeater
And I live one floor below.”
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“My house has been frozen
For three days and three nights now,
So I have been sleeping
Inside your old nightgown.”
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Alfie looked puzzled.
“One floor below?
There’s nothing down there
Except for the burrow.”
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“It’s under your floorboards.
I don’t need much space,”
Said Peter the Crumbeater
With a smile on his face.
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“Your rocket looks awesome!
Please let me watch.
It’s so exciting
To countdown for launch.”
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“I’ve eaten your cheese crumbs
And I’d like to repay
By helping your mission.
So, what do you say?”
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Alfie considered,
Then said, “Please do.
The mission’s success
Depends on its crew”.
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“Thank you, Commander,”
Said Peter saluting.
“I’m waiting for orders,
Whatever needs doing.”
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They opened all windows
Facing east side of town.
Then took the positions
And started the countdown.
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The rocket reached ceiling,
Then fell on Alfie’s head.
It gave him two bruises
And crashed on his bed.
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They tried five more times
Without any luck.
The rocket hit furniture
And kept getting stuck.
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“I have an idea,”
Said Peter excited.
“I’m small enough
To fit in inside it.”
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“Fantastic!” yelled Alfie
And helped Peter in.
Explained the controls
And checked rocket’s engine.
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“Have fun and eat
As much as you please.
The moon’s made of crackers
And best kind of cheese.”
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Alfie then waved
And shouted: “Goodbye!”
Peter waved back
And gave him a smile.
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He flew out the window
And above the tall trees.
Towards the Moon
Made out of cheese.
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All boys and girls,
Please don’t forget
To wave to Peter
Who flies in his rocket.
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He flies round the Moon
And turns the stars on.
He eats cheese for lunch
And sleeps at dawn.
oh how lovely – I bet your children enjoyed it.
Comment by Sophie Whitley Flavell — 14/03/2010 @ 21:39 |
ha ha they did, thanks!
Comment by Monika Thornton — 15/03/2010 @ 09:58 |